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“May this way” ash wisped in May ear. All of a sudden ash grab may by the arm and pulled her down this path “  ouch what was that 4” said may “shh!” said ash “don’t let Brock and misty hear.”  “Why” said May “because I have a surprise 4 you!” said ash “arr your so sweet, ash” said may blushing “no it nothing” said ash blushing “come on down this path” said ash running down the path. Look the beach plz can we walk along it” ask May. “That was part of my surprise” said ash “and we got here just in time look the sun set how romantic” said may (.................) “Ash are you ok?”Said may “hu what.....ya!”Said ash “ash can I tell you something?”may ask “ya fire away” said ash “well I will show you!” said may but before she could she hear a familiar voice “hi ash hi may” said the voice “hi dawn” said ash running down the beach to her “long time no see” said ash “yer well what you doing down her with may on your own” said dawn jokily “.....”said ash “yer any way how you dawn haven’t seen you since you left me in snowpoint city” “oh plz don’t bring that up I told you I was sorry 4 braking your heart over the phone and in letter you did get the letter didn’t you?” said dawn yer and the photo I carry the photo with me everywhere” said ash putting his hand in to his pocked and bring out a very good look after photo of him and dawn. “It means a lot to me. I promise myself that I would do this if I ever saw you again.” Said ash leaning over and gently kissing dawn on the lips. “I  hope you understand 4 old time sake” said ash blushing “I don’t mind” said dawn hold ash hand for re-assurance  “WELL I DO AND LET GO OF HIS HAND NOW,YOU HAD YOUR CHANCY NOW IT MINE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!”Shouted May angrily “..........................”said dawn “leave her alone I said it was 4 old time sake” said ash “no she right I shouldn’t be here at all and I shouldn’t de hold your hand” said as she bust in to tears. ”dawn, dawn, DAWN”said a new voice “she got a big mouth than dawn” said may “may you have over  done it” said ash  “what the matter?” she look up and sees  ash “oh I see, hi I’m Lou and this is Lou fist. Fist met his face.” Said Lou as she punch ash “Ow what was that 4?”said ash “don’t act as if you don’t know just because u have a pretty face don’t mean Lou cant se right though you” said Lou “Lou you had to overdo it” said dawn “what?”Said Lou “it not his fault, it mine.” said dawn no it not it Mays 4 get all heat up about something harmless.” Said ash “I’m confused” said Lou. “oh sorry I punch you.” That ok” said ash. Come on dawn let go. Said Lou and dawn and Lou walk away. “I think we better get going to” said ash storming off. Look I’m sorry I know I can overdo it sometimes, oh plz forgive me?” said may “really?” said ash “really, I won’t do anything to upset you.” said May “I’m sorry I lost at you.” said ash “now do you want to know where we are going?” “yes” said may happily “ok we are going to the most exspive hotel in the region, are you happy?” said ash “oh yes but how?” said may “oh only most of my life saving.” said ash “oh ash you shouldn’t.” Said May tapping him on the nose. “Yes I should” said ash tapping her back they stared a game of chase but the tapped each other on the nose. Just then may tripped and fell in to a sand drew. And so did ash. Ash landed on top of May and realised what position he was in and try to get up but may pulled him back and said “i don’t mind, oh can I show you what I wanted to earlier” “yes” said ash and suddenly may pulled ash closer until they lip where touching. Ash was lifted by the fall moon and well everything. All of a sudden ash hear a voice “listen” he said “that brocks” come on let run said ash as he help may out of the sand drew and grab her by the hand and ran .by the time Brock ,misty, dawn and Lou. “Hay you no ash” said Lou     “yer” said dawn “hay Lou how do you know ash” said Brock and misty. Oh dawn was talking to him and she was upset and I over reacted and assumed it was his fault and punch him.” Said Lou “Oh ok” said Brock “what about ash, Lou?" said dawn “um.... does he have a...girlfriend....?” ask Lou “what?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!”Said the other 3. “What he cute!” said Lou “not to mention hot” “look Lou! He not going to go 4 you if he didn’t go 4 me” said misty “oh I thought he might considering I’m 15.”Said Lou “you what?”Said misty and Brock “what I am 16 on the 3rd of March” said Lou “well....”said Brock “don’t you dear” said misty “ok I won’t put idea in her head” said Brock “yer you won’t” said misty any way if he did I think the answer would be no. Ash look too happy with May to go out with anyone else espalier someone who punch him in the face.” said dawn “what” said Brock “may" said misty “yes may I think ash is dating may” said dawn. “Let go home and get some sleep” said Lou do you 2 want to stay at the place me and dawn reated out. Mean while ash and may had made it to the hotel
just alitttle stroy
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dinoshark0992 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2011
its so sweet *cries* :(,
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ashandmay4ever Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2011
thanks , this i quite old , i am suprised i didn't take it down with the rest of the ones i did glad you liked it
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dinoshark0992 Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2011
well i hope we can be good friends
and i love your art work
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ashandmay4ever Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2011
yeah , me too
an thanks xxx
got bit of artist block at the moment
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Ash281 Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2009
That was great!
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ashandmay4ever Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2009
thank you it still unfinshed.
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Ash281 Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2009
Well I hope you finish it
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Sredit Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2009
This is very good!! You've done a great job, but why is it you right it so difficultly i have trouble reading it?? Sorry if that offends, I was just wondering. But it really is a great job
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ashandmay4ever Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2009
i have a proble with my grammer and spelling and never read though my work more than once
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Sredit Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2009
S'allrite!! ^^
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