May this way ash wisped in May ear. All of a sudden ash grab may by the arm and pulled her down this path ouch what was that 4 said may shh! said ash dont let Brock and misty hear. Why said May because I have a surprise 4 you! said ash arr your so sweet, ash said may blushing no it nothing said ash blushing come on down this path said ash running down the path. Look the beach plz can we walk along it ask May. That was part of my surprise said ash and we got here just in time look the sun set how romantic said may (.................) Ash are you ok?Said may hu what.....ya!Said ash ash can I tell you something?may ask ya fire away said ash well I will show you! said may but before she could she hear a familiar voice hi ash hi may said the voice hi dawn said ash running down the beach to her long time no see said ash yer well what you doing down her with may on your own said dawn jokily .....said ash yer any way how you dawn havent seen you since you left me in snowpoint city oh plz dont bring that up I told you I was sorry 4 braking your heart over the phone and in letter you did get the letter didnt you? said dawn yer and the photo I carry the photo with me everywhere said ash putting his hand in to his pocked and bring out a very good look after photo of him and dawn. It means a lot to me. I promise myself that I would do this if I ever saw you again. Said ash leaning over and gently kissing dawn on the lips. I hope you understand 4 old time sake said ash blushing I dont mind said dawn hold ash hand for re-assurance WELL I DO AND LET GO OF HIS HAND NOW,YOU HAD YOUR CHANCY NOW IT MINE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Shouted May angrily ..........................said dawn leave her alone I said it was 4 old time sake said ash no she right I shouldnt be here at all and I shouldnt de hold your hand said as she bust in to tears. dawn, dawn, DAWNsaid a new voice she got a big mouth than dawn said may may you have over done it said ash what the matter? she look up and sees ash oh I see, hi Im Lou and this is Lou fist. Fist met his face. Said Lou as she punch ash Ow what was that 4?said ash dont act as if you dont know just because u have a pretty face dont mean Lou cant se right though you said Lou Lou you had to overdo it said dawn what?Said Lou it not his fault, it mine. said dawn no it not it Mays 4 get all heat up about something harmless. Said ash Im confused said Lou. oh sorry I punch you. That ok said ash. Come on dawn let go. Said Lou and dawn and Lou walk away. I think we better get going to said ash storming off. Look Im sorry I know I can overdo it sometimes, oh plz forgive me? said may really? said ash really, I wont do anything to upset you. said May Im sorry I lost at you. said ash now do you want to know where we are going? yes said may happily ok we are going to the most exspive hotel in the region, are you happy? said ash oh yes but how? said may oh only most of my life saving. said ash oh ash you shouldnt. Said May tapping him on the nose. Yes I should said ash tapping her back they stared a game of chase but the tapped each other on the nose. Just then may tripped and fell in to a sand drew. And so did ash. Ash landed on top of May and realised what position he was in and try to get up but may pulled him back and said i dont mind, oh can I show you what I wanted to earlier yes said ash and suddenly may pulled ash closer until they lip where touching. Ash was lifted by the fall moon and well everything. All of a sudden ash hear a voice listen he said that brocks come on let run said ash as he help may out of the sand drew and grab her by the hand and ran .by the time Brock ,misty, dawn and Lou. Hay you no ash said Lou yer said dawn hay Lou how do you know ash said Brock and misty. Oh dawn was talking to him and she was upset and I over reacted and assumed it was his fault and punch him. Said Lou Oh ok said Brock what about ash, Lou?" said dawn um.... does he have a...girlfriend....? ask Lou what?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Said the other 3. What he cute! said Lou not to mention hot look Lou! He not going to go 4 you if he didnt go 4 me said misty oh I thought he might considering Im 15.Said Lou you what?Said misty and Brock what I am 16 on the 3rd of March said Lou well....said Brock dont you dear said misty ok I wont put idea in her head said Brock yer you wont said misty any way if he did I think the answer would be no. Ash look too happy with May to go out with anyone else espalier someone who punch him in the face. said dawn what said Brock may" said misty yes may I think ash is dating may said dawn. Let go home and get some sleep said Lou do you 2 want to stay at the place me and dawn reated out. Mean while ash and may had made it to the hotel
just alitttle stroy
its so sweet *cries* ,
thanks , this i quite old , i am suprised i didn't take it down with the rest of the ones i did glad you liked it
That was great!
This is very good!! You've done a great job, but why is it you right it so difficultly i have trouble reading it?? Sorry if that offends, I was just wondering. But it really is a great job
i have a proble with my grammer and spelling and never read though my work more than once
Wow, that is pretty good.
Totally great. Keep up the story work
Totally great. Keep up the story work